Greetings, all. I am participating in D.L. Finn’s latest writing challenge and happy to share. Please check out all of the wonderful contributions by going to her BLOG!
The prompt was this graphic and it certainly sparked my creativity.
I chose to respond to this prompt with a free-verse poem. This poem expresses what I truly feel inside. I believe we stand on the precipice of change and spiritual evolution, and while change is sometimes unpleasant, the result is most often rewarding. For instance, the road that goes out to my daughter’s house is under construction, because as the giant subdivisions have popped up, the road can’t handle all the traffic. So, for now, it’s a nightmare trying to get out there. The end result will be great, but the time in between is painful. So, it’s the same on a spiritual level as we grow and learn on our chosen path. I hope you enjoy the poem!
She pauses on the threshold of awakening
One foot in this world
One foot in the next
Trusting the strength
Of the bridge beneath her feet
Connecting the third dimension
To the fifth
She takes tentative steps
Focused on and moving forward
Always toward the light
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Love this, Jan. It really captures the fantasy feel and how what the girl is facing is much bigger than herself.
Thank you, Teri. So glad you enjoyed it.
What a beautiful poem – always moving toward the light. I love that.
Thank you, Marsha. So glad you enjoyed it.
A great and positive poem, Jan. Well done
Thank you, Robbie. So glad you enjoyed it.
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I love this. Perfectly encapsulates what someone can feel in the midst of change. 🌻
Thank you, Nicole. I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
You’re very welcome 🌻
Great job, Jan!
Sandra
Thank you, Sandra!
Beautiful poem, Jan!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
That’s beautiful, Jan, and what a lovely inspiration. Growth is often painful, but worth the effort. Denise’s prompt is gorgeous and your poem fits perfectly.
Thank you, Diana. You are right about growth being painful at times, but is it worth every effort. I appreciate you stopping by and leaving a comment!
A wonderful response Jan… loved it. ♥
Thank you, Sally. I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
It is an inspirational poem with beautiful thoughts
Thank you, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed it!
So beautifully said, Jan. I like that we keep moving towards the light even in the middle of chaos! I’m feeling the same thing. xo
I am glad you enjoyed it, Denise. Thanks for the prompt!
Such a positive message–“always toward the light”
Thank you, Jacqui. Glad you enjoyed it.
Excellent response to the prompt, Jan!
Thank you, Priscilla. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
You painted an interesting version for that image, Jan.Well done.
Thank you, Dan. Glad you enjoyed it!
Fantastic thoughts, Jan, so nicely expressed in your poem.
Thanks, Tim. So glad you enjoyed it.